AAAAND A POEM BY LUCAS! (not to be confused with the psionic kid from Earthbound)

That's right: To my knowledge, Lucas shares no common trait with Lucas from Earthbound, except for hair color. But, don't you worry, because unlike Lucas, Lucas is a poet! Lucas writes cool poetry, like this piece here and if you don't want to see language, then you can skip out my review of the piece.

I Don't Know

by: Lucas (Not from Earthbound)

Lights are dimmed

And the pants are around ankles

Computer screen like a movie beam

Shoots out sound and noise and feeling

Feeling each other and himself

“Whatcha doin’ there girls?”

“Nothin’.”

“You girls like to party?”

“Umm..yeah.”

Nodded heads along with them pictures on the mantelpieces

Sleeping snores come from the bedroom door

The lights are dimmed, dimmed like always

Like automatic friction means more than

Eggshell stained pants and sheets

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What I liked:

FUCK YEAH! This poem made me happy because it's about life in all its uncensored dirtiness. It is therefore perfect because it doesn't shy away from those things that make us human. I like how he approaches the subject very casually. Wonderful all around.

Improvements:

I dunno, dude. Maybe you could have written about meadows that were sexually charged.